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Please edit my essay about Martin Luther King Jr.?

I have to hand in this essay by tomorrow... and all my friends are busy doing that too. PLEASE HELP Thanks A Ton!! :D Martin Luther King Jr. He had a dream. A dream that one day, the black’s will live in a nation with peace, and freedom. “I have a dream that my four children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character.” –Martin Luther King Jr. Martin Luther King. Jr. was born with a name of Michael Luther King. Jr, but later changed to Martin Luther King Jr. He was born in Atlanta, Georgia in 1929; a time when black people were separated from the whites. Negroes what they called black people because they had the same rights as the white people did. To most white people, “Negroes” didn’t have a name. They called them boy or girl, and even worse, “Nigger.” Then, Martin discovered that his house on Auburn Avenue was referred to as “Nigger Town,” to the whites. He thought that how poor he and the other black people were treated by the whites, weren’t fair at all. Martin Luther King Jr. is a hero because e wanted to stop racism. He got killed for speaking his mind about how the black people were being treated so poorly, but few days after Martin Luther King Jr. was shot, whites treated black people as more equal. Martin Luther King Jr. faces many obstacles of prejudice against African Americans. His white friends stopped playing with his because he was black, and was different to the white people. He was arrested, got subjected to personal abuse, and his own house got hit by a bomb when he stopped the seating spots between black, and white people. Martin Luther King Jr. gets assassinated while standing on his balcony with the garbage workers in his motel room by a man because of his hate to black people. Although Martin Luther King Jr. was faced by many obstacles, he passed it through and changed many races that the black people faced. He had many goals to change the rights black people faced from the whites. With his selfless wishes to change whatever made the blacks suffer, he needed to change it no matter what happens. When his mother said the world’s going to change one day, Martin promised her, “I’m going to turn this world upside down.” He also promised that there will be changes for racial justice, better housing, better schooling, and better jobs in the ghetto neighbourhoods of Chicago. He wanted the signs for “white only” or “colored only” signs to change, and just use everything in equal. Although Martin Luther King wasn’t treated as poorly as the other blacks were treated, he still had a care to do whatever he needed to change, and believed that soon they will stop getting treated poorly and live with peace. Finally, Martin as a leader of America’s civil rights movement, his hopes and dreams came true. After the union victory, several constitutional amendments were adopted and the Fifteenth Amendment gave black men the right to vote, desegregation, labour rights, and other basic civil rights and changed the world. He made black and whites reunite with eachother; both black and whites rode the buses in equal. For his outstanding work and success for what he achieved, and for making the lives for black people happy, he won the nobel peace prize for his leadership of America’s struggle for racism in 1964. In conclusion, Martin Luther King Jr. was able to achieve great amounts of success. His work was successful during the civil rights movement, and he helped gain many rights for African Americans which not only helped the African Americans, but helped all minorities. He organized and led marches for blacks’ right to vote, and was not afraid to stand up and spoke his heart to create diversity. Without Martin Luther King, the civil rights fight could have been much more violent, and also the laws for the white, and black people would stay the same. His fight was effective, and for the most part, he was successful and peaceful. Martin Luther King’s success created an everlasting memory to not only the black people, but to all of us. ugh, the thing with the stars says : Ni gg . er and as i read over them, i got a lot of typos LOL.. i think it's cuz i was just typing with me looking at the paper and writing it down haha.

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  1. Well I guess I am to late to help you with this one. But from the get go I think it is I have a dream not had a dream. I hope you got a good grade anyway.
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